I threw that valentine I wrote to you away today
I was saving you the trouble
Since the day I said that shit to you
And pissed you off
We haven’t really spoken,
But I still think of you sometimes at night
And I wonder if you’re lonely?
And I know you hate me
But I still feel for you
But not like I used to…
See, every day I know you’re near me
And I know that you’re hurting
And I know that its showing
And no matter how you try to hide
I see right through you
Because I know you
And I know you know I do
Unlike the piece of paper lying in the garbage
I cant just throw you away…
©2006-2009 ~moonywerecat
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I wrote this about a friendship i fucked up by my words and actions...
and the valentine is in my garbage...
You criticize me for rhyming and structuring. Now you criticize me for NOT rhyming and structuring, Everyday words and speaking... is all poetry. Just b/c it doesnt rhyme or use fancy language doesnt mean it isn't. This is what I was told to do by my Professor. And let's face it, I'm not trying to please anyone, especially anyone who isn't me. So if you're going to tell me that it should rhyme or use some kind of language yanked from Shakespeare, you can suck it because this is poetry, it is LYRICAL poetry which unfortunately isnt formatted correctly.
and the valentine is in my garbage...
You criticize me for rhyming and structuring. Now you criticize me for NOT rhyming and structuring, Everyday words and speaking... is all poetry. Just b/c it doesnt rhyme or use fancy language doesnt mean it isn't. This is what I was told to do by my Professor. And let's face it, I'm not trying to please anyone, especially anyone who isn't me. So if you're going to tell me that it should rhyme or use some kind of language yanked from Shakespeare, you can suck it because this is poetry, it is LYRICAL poetry which unfortunately isnt formatted correctly.
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Life is like a box of chocolates.... chocolates make me sick.
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Я хочу задавить ваш череп!!!
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私の愛は死んでいる....
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The real test of a hero is knowing when the greater good will be served by an evil act.
*hugs*
[link] makes me think of you
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Я хочу задавить ваш череп!!!
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私の愛は死んでいる....
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Life is like a box of chocolates.... chocolates make me sick.
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